The next day he went to school he forgot all about the book that told you how to make teachers nice. It was 1:00 pm and he has only remembered a bit. Then he suddenly remembered. “Noooooooooooooo!” he shouted because it was 1:45 pm. He quickly ran into the principals office and did those steps he found in the book.
1:58pm… well, it was getting late anyway so just be careful. This is a bit scary. Well, you’ll see. Watt is pretty clever by reading the steps carefully so ‘hurrah’ for Watt! Sadly, it was 2:00 and 1 second by the time so ‘ya-boo’ for Watt.
“Ohboyohboyohboyohboyohboyohboyohboyohboyohboyohboyohboyohboyohboyohboyohboyohboyohboyohboyohboyohboyohboy!” stammered Watt. “Now something bad is going to happen.” Watt had forgotten that the part on the second page on the book was continued on page 3. He forgot to read it so ‘oopsie-daisies’ for Watt. The third page (i.e.page 3) had said that you had to wait for a day until the bad thing happens. Watt wanted to scream. He wanted to yell. He wanted to tie his tail up into knots. But he couldn’t. He didn’t have a tail!
Well, this was just the start of this strange story. It’s a quackomedy story, like I said. He going to be very frightened. This was the mement that he was going to tie his tail that he didn’t have up into knots.
1 day leter… (about) Um… do you really want to know what happens? Well are you sure? Ok, I’ll tell you. He went inside a story called The adventures of the duck who was 1000 years old. It was a duckventurous story, yes. But that didn’t stop me (Watt) to write a quackomedy story!
Coming soon: Watt? 4: The adventures of the duck who was 1000 years old
This is my favourite chapter so far.
Lots of tension with the time problem – and the tail – Watt wanted to scream. He wanted to yell. He wanted to tie his tail up into knots. But he couldn’t. He didn’t have a tail! (I like the short sentences here. You are very good a writing humour.)
The way you leave each chapter with an exciting lead in to what is coming next is very effective. Charles Dickens would have been proud of you.
hey, in the ‘name’, write your name
I think my English teacher has gone a bit to far…